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How to Write Emails that Pave the Way Towards Action

What does it take for an idea to register? The challenge is that information alone isn’t enough to convince or teach. The way you deliver information matters.

When Melissa Studzinski joined General Mills as a brand manager for the product Hamburger Helper, she got binders of data, market research and surveys, and briefs to help do her job. These “death binders,” as she called them, overwhelmed her with information in the abstract. What clicked for Melissa and her team was when they started visiting moms cooking in their kitchens. She says,

“I’ll never forget one woman, who had a toddler on her hip while she was mixing up dinner on the stove. We know that ‘convenience’ is an important attribute of our product, but it’s a different thing to see the need for convenience firsthand.”

Chip and Dan Heath tell this story in Made to Stick to illustrate the power of concreteness, how decision-making can be easier when guided by specific experiences. For Melissa, actually seeing moms in their homes delivered insights into the value of predictability and convenience for mothers and the kids they were feeding, over the extensive variety the company had been pushing. After simplifying the product line and adapting the ads, sales of Hamburger Helper increased by 11%.

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In email marketing, it’s easy to deliver death by confusing abstractions or to take haphazard stabs at what we think will motivate. Instead we can educate, nurture, and convince much more effectively by using concreteness.

How Concrete Language Motivates

Concrete things exist in the real world. You can reach out and touch them, or stub your toe on them, and that vividness provides an entry-point into your audience’s reality. By doing some of the mental work in how your message is presented, people don’t have to expend extra brainpower unpacking fuzzy abstractions and figuring out exactly what you mean.

Whether it’s Aesop’s fables or a punchy elevator pitch, concreteness makes messages easier to understand, remember, and even believe. Concrete language is easier for the brain to parse and recall, and as psychologists Jochim Hansen and Michaele Wänke found in a 2010 study, the mind takes speedily processed and recallable information as more true and believable.

Take this pair of sentences used in the study:

  • In Hamburg, one can count the highest number of bridges in Europe. [concrete]
  • Hamburg is the European record holder concerning the number of bridges. [abstract]

Even when meaning and level of detail are the same, as in these Hamburg bridge descriptions, subtle linguistic framing makes a meaningful difference in how the information is digested.

“Linguistic concreteness makes the described situations more imaginable,” Hansen and Wänke write. “Increased imaginability, in turn, causes people to believe the statements with greater likelihood.” Framing the information as an experience that the reader is performing instead of plainly stating the fact that Hamburg has the most bridges in Europe feels more concrete, and so, adds credibility and persuasiveness.

Concrete language also paves the way for easier judgment calls and decisions. Because people can imagine and believe concrete statements, they can also envision outcomes and feel more comfortable making decisions towards those outcomes. For instance, researchers found that using more concrete language like “one share of IBM stock” rather than a generic “asset” in disclosures increased investors’ willingness to invest in a firm.

The researchers also found that highlighting concrete language reduces feelings of psychological distance. If you’re not familiar with something, confusing jargon, vague generalities, and abstract ideas end up becoming reasons to lose interest. In email of course, those are immediate reasons to unsubscribe, delete, ignore, or even spam.

Concreteness offers a bridge of believability and affinity to cross over and explore new things.

Applying Concreteness In Your Emails

So what does communicating with concreteness mean in practice? Present your message in a way that’s easy to imagine, visualize, and even feel as a reader. That may involve:

  • vivid storytelling
  • specificity and contextual details
  • images, graphics, and photos
  • illustrative examples, like testimonials and case study details
  • language of the senses
  • personas and personalization, speaking to the experiences and needs of specific people (or types of people)
  • describing a shared experience, like coming together to solve the same problem

You’re using details, but not just any old details either. They have to be specifics that take into account the audience’s point of view. That way, they can inhabit, imagine, and absorb.

As the Hamburg bridge examples shows, word choice and framing matters too. Here’s a brief primer from psychologists Gün Semin and Klaus Fiedler’s “Linguistic Category Model” which categorizes types of words from concrete to abstract:

  • Descriptive action verbs describe specific behaviors in specific situations, with little room for interpretation. They’re less likely to have positive or negative connotations. e.g., count, crouch, kiss, run
  • Interpretive action verb describe general behavior in a specific situation and requires some interpretation. These verbs also tend to have positive or negative connotations. e.g., help, cheat, threaten
  • State verb describe emotional, mental, or feeling states that have no clear beginning or end. e.g., believe, love, admire, envy
  • Adjectives are the most abstract type of word and require a lot of interpretation. e.g., creative, impulsive, reliable

To aim for concreteness, then, use more descriptive and interpretive action verbs and hold off on the adjectives.

Since concreteness helps close gaps with psychological distance, it’s especially useful when you’re dealing with newness — new users or audience members, new features, and other types of new situations. Concreteness, funnily enough, is your welcoming, pillowy soft landing for your readers’ minds.

Let’s look at a few email examples:

Close.io

About a week after a new app signup for Close.io, a sales CRM tool, they trigger a very long email from CEO Steli Efti.

Close.io

Click for full, epic email

Why does this message clock in at over 1,000 words? It’s sharing many stories, all designed to build a bridge to the reader and hopefully ferry them over closer to activation and engagement.

Instead of saying something like “Get started because Close.io is the best!” — Steli shows you why with a resonating origin story. You learn that the Close.io team is solving a pain they had experienced firsthand. That’s why the specific descriptions of existing solutions that turn people into “manual data-entry-monkeys” feels magnetic. They’ve walked in your shoes, their product started out as their own secret sales sauce — this is Close.io’s version of showing that they’ve been in moms’ kitchens and understand their needs.

Close.io

After testimonial quotes from real-life happy customers, Steli brings the focus back to you. Envision your future — you’ll make better calls and emails, escape the data-entry monkey zoolife, and gain sales data insights — and here are all the details on how that all comes into existence.

Casetext

Casetext is a handy platform for legal writing, research, and publication. Their mission is to make legal knowledge and resources free and understandable. Here’s an email Casetext sent out about one of its contributors Leah Litman, who has written about retroactivity of a law affecting convictions.

Casetext newsletter email

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The message describes how Leah’s Casetext piece was cited in a legal brief to the Supreme Court, providing a concrete example of the reach and impact that publishing your work on Casetext and being part of its community can have. Your words can go all the way to the top!

Instead of listing out cool, snazzy features or even a bunch of abstract benefits, Casetext succeeds in making all that come together in telling Leah’s story.

The call-to-action button is a great concrete touch, too:

Casetext newsletter call-to-action

Instead of something generic like “learn more” or “sign up” — it’s a specific and relevant direction: start writing!

Appcues

Appcues, a user onboarding tool, unsurprisingly has put some thought into their triggered activation emails. A few days after you sign up for the product, you get an email with the subject line “Honestly, I was blown away…”

Appcues triggered onboarding drip email

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The email highlights one specific company, StoryboardThat, and the specific successes — 112% increase in conversions! — they had using Appcues.

This is a story that will resonate with Appcues’s target audience: here’s a real-life small team that has to deal with many competing priorities but wanted to make their user onboarding more effective. Here is what actually happened after they starting using Appcues, including this impressive A/B test result that blew the customer away.

Appcues onboarding email concrete A/B test

Their call-to-action button copy is on point too. Even though the link simply takes you into the app, the message is not about signing in or checking Appcues out. Instead, it’s about the very clearly defined goal that the reader has: increase your conversion rate.

Appcues onboarding email concrete example

Finally, the Appcues team includes the picture of the person featured in the story, which makes it easier to see and understand who was impacted. Aaron is a real person, very much like you, who wants to increase conversion rates without having to wrangle a bunch of code.


Telling relevant stories, showing specific examples, and using concrete language is simply part of good writing and effective communication. Still, concreteness is a remarkably helpful principle that keeps you thinking about your reader and customer’s experience. It battles against your curse of knowledge, the fact that your product or business takes up such a large part of your mind compared to a visitor or prospect, or even loyal customer, and often gets in the way of getting your actual point across.

Our emails and messages shouldn’t be death-by-information but helpful bridges and balloons that bring people up and over to where they want to go.

Do you have an example of super concrete or super abstract language in an email? Share with us in the comments

Behavioral Messaging

How Clearbit Conquered the Welcome Email

One of the top email marketing mistakes is trying to squeeze everything into one message, and welcome emails are no exception.

In that pivotal moment of first impression, the temptation is high to get the reader to do it all: here’s everything you need to know to get started, upgrade here, follow us on Facebook, check out these cool features, oh and welcome! That jumbling makes it hard for people to connect and find what’s actually motivating — relevance.

So when we saw how Clearbit was personalizing their welcome emails through Customer.io, we were thrilled and inspired.

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Clearbit started out sending a general welcome to everyone who signed up, but the team realized that they weren’t dealing with a mass of generic John Does who all wanted the same thing. Instead, their customers had three distinct roles — engineering, marketing, and sales — with distinct needs.

What if they could trigger a welcome email with a message that was personalized based on the role? Fortunately, Clearbit is a business intelligence tool that enables you to look up and automatically pull in data about companies and people. The fact that they were already piping in their own Clearbit-enriched data into Customer.io made that personalized automation possible.

Here’s how they did it!

Work Your Segmentation Magic

At first, the Clearbit team created their engineering, marketing, and sales segments by hacking together a clever system of 70 conditions looking at keywords and patterns in the available enrichment data associated with an email address.

If you have a Github account associated with your email address, for example, you’d fall into the developer segment and get a message targeted towards engineers. Since the categorization rules looked at information like job title on LinkedIn and social media bios, I would fall into the marketing segment and get a welcome focused on marketer’s goals. Here’s a taste for what the conditions for building the sales segment looked like:

Clearbit

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Soon, the Clearbit team realized how useful this role categorization was. They could apply this system to make role and seniority attributions available through their own API, just like a Twitter handle or a company’s size. The keyword and pattern analysis happens behind the scenes and spits out a standardized attribute in the API response.

Now Clearbit’s role segments require just one condition to build in Customer.io. Here’s how that same sales role segment is built:

Clearbit sales role segment

Get Super Relevant in Your Message

The early versions of Clearbit’s general welcome message that got sent to everyone are brief but not very specific. Here’s the first iteration of this general welcome:

early version of Clearbit

While the email gets many welcoming elements right, the message provides an array of use cases and suggestions that don’t quite come together. This information mash-up makes it more difficult for an individual to figure out what Clearbit is and how it will help them do their job better. A marketer might not be capable of writing scripts while a developer probably has absolutely no interest in sales activities. “We were trying to cover all the bases with one email,” as Clearbit’s Matt Sornson told us.

In contrast, here’s the newer marketer-focused welcome, and you can tell from the first few lines who this message is for. This reader is going to become a “marketing god with Clearbit data”!

Clearbit

Click for the full email.

The Clearbit team noticed that frequently asked questions from marketing and sales folks centered around integrations and lookup tools. So the marketing welcome email features pre-built integrations with popular tools, shows a handy Google Sheets extension, and offers a way to get in touch for further assistance.

Let’s look at the engineering-focused welcome. This email is shorter and zeroes in on trying out a first API call and setting up an integration. Note the change in subject line too, from “Let’s get started!” to “Let’s build something!”

Clearbit

The Results

Upon receiving his welcome email, Matt Cox, an engineer on the Customer.io team who set up our own integration with Clearbit, felt the motivating power of relevance firsthand. He noted,

As a developer, getting an email that gave me links to the docs and the encouragement to build something cool was immediately useful and a breath of fresh air compared to other emails I’ve received. It was motivating to not have to dig through things to get what I needed.

Clearbit is seeing the positive impact as well. With most users coming in the door identified as developers, the emails are seeing these paid conversion rates: the marketing welcome converts at 7.3%; developer at 3.6%; and sales at 1.8%. Compared to those early, non-specific emails, Matt Sornson observes, “It’s clear that it makes a pretty big difference to be able to send those different emails.”

Now, you don’t need a Clearbit integration to start tailoring your own welcome messages. Maybe you’re receiving job role information as part of your sign-up flow, or you have data identifying which landing page or marketing campaign new users came in from, or you know what level plan people sign up for. The data you collect and insights you learn about your customers serve as valuable information for you to deliver better experiences and more effective messages to your users.

Gone are the days of grasping at straws in front of your audience. Instead of making tentative guesses like “if you’re a developer” or “if you’re on the Gold plan” and trying to cover all your bases with a well-meaning (but crazily optimistic) kitchen-sink approach — you can come up with a sharp, effective, and helpful welcome that sticks.

Do your customers fit into different personas? How do you personalize your approach! Our ears (well, eyes) are wide open in the comments.

One Big Behavioral Economics Lesson for Email Marketers

Imagine you’re on your way to work and happen upon a pop-up coffee stand. They’re handing out free cups of coffee in exchange for feedback about the drink. There’s a table with the usual coffee-related complements like milk, cream, and sugar — but also some offbeat options like orange peel, sweet paprika, and anise.

Even if you have absolutely no interest in adding a dash of paprika to your coffee, the fashion in which those offbeat spices are presented — whether they’re in classy crystal spice containers or jagged-edged Styrofoam cups — will likely affect your enjoyment of your coffee.

That’s what researchers Marco Bertini, Elie Ofek, and Dan Ariely discovered when they ran this experiment at MIT. Ariely describes the results in his book, Predictably Irrational:

[T]he interesting thing was that when the odd condiments were offered in the fancy containers, the coffee drinkers were much more likely to tell us that they liked the coffee a lot, that they would be willing to pay well for it, and that they would recommend that we should start serving this new blend in the cafeteria. When the coffee ambience looked upscale, in other words, the coffee tasted upscale as well.

Whether you go for a fancy pour-over at a hipster cafe, the comforting contents of a hefty diner mug, or a skinny extra-hot caramel macchiato upside down venti at Starbucks — you probably have a strong preference about where you get your brew. How did that preference come to be? There’s a lot at work beyond the cut-and-dry calculation of quality and cost — a jumble of taste, memory, perception, feeling, and as this experiment shows, the design around your experience.

Ariely is a behavioral economist, which means he studies how psychological, emotional, and cognitive factors impact our motivation, decision-making, and behavior, or more simply put, why the heck we do what we do, in spite of all our diets and dreams. Of course, looking to fields like behavioral economics and psychology is nothing new in marketing — if anything, it’s part and parcel of the job — nor is it very surprising that aspects like presentation shapes behavior.

And yet.

I’ve been thinking a lot about email marketing goals, how we see much more handwringing over the short-term pursuit of opens and clicks versus the long-term pursuit of meaningfully understanding and impacting customer behavior.

Sometimes the nuggets of insight into human nature we get from fields like behavioral economics seem tailor-made to apply as email hacks and ploys — but in doing so, we might be missing the forest for the trees, customers for clicks. How are your email messages changing decisions beyond the click? How are they influencing broader customer perception, experience, and behavior?

Designing behavioral marketing decisions

Kristen Berman, a co-founder with Ariely, of Irrational Labs, reminds us that whatever our intentions, the way we communicate, operate, and build things affects what people do:

It is the person who designs the environment in which we live in who has the most influence on our decisions as opposed to the person who is actually making the decision.

How you communicate with your users is part of their environment. You’re playing a role in designing their decisions beyond the issue of whether they clicked on a link or not. You see, email plays especially well as an environmental element or a component of choice architecture. Because email tends to span a series of multiple interactions, serve as an extension of your product or offering, and feel personal and relevant, you can use it to design experiences.

Great experience design provides a notable competitive advantage. In the brick-and-mortar world, that may be the interior design and atmosphere of a space. The ambience that Starbucks deliberately created in their stores, for example, played a vital role in their success. The roasty aroma of fresh ground beans, the earthy colors and smooth music, and menu of fancy Italian-sounding drink names at a time when third places were few and third-wave coffee yet to bloom established Starbucks’s position as a go-to spot. “I’ve always loved the design aspect of Starbucks,” chairman and CEO Howard Schultz writes in his memoir Pour Your Heart Into It. “I consider graphics and store design to be a differentiating factor, a way to show our customers that Starbucks is one step ahead.”

Many internet businesses (that aren’t e-commerce) put off or don’t put resources into user communication, beyond occasional announcements and promotions. But what’s going to stand out and keep you steps ahead in this software-eating age is people’s experiences in the environment you create for them — and a core part of that is how you communicate with them.

To me, the most significant takeaway from behavioral economics that we can apply to marketing, and email in particular, is to push to be much more creative, empathetic, and intentional when it comes to people’s experiences. Are we designing decisions, architecting choices, building value, and promoting people’s experiences or merely promoting?

Do you have any email success metrics beyond opens and clicks? Share with us in the comments!

Scale Trust, Not Lists

Stop obsessing over the size of your email lists. It’s distracting you from the real work of quality growth — of building audiences, developing customers, and nurturing relationships.

When you’re consumed by list growth, your job is merely about the numbers rolling in, contained to the hunt and capture of one more email address. Great email marketing is not so simplistic or shallow.

That’s not to disregard the fact that businesses have to make money. But there are deeper values at stake when it comes to how you email. As Justine Jordan, Litmus’s VP of Marketing, told us:

Email is the ultimate way for a marketer to connect with their audience. Too often what happens is marketers just think about it as a high ROI channel.

That opinion leads us down a path of bad behavior, where we look at email like it only has capabilities to make our companies money. Often that comes in the form of shoving promotions, discounts, and deals down people’s throats.

Every email is not a sale, though your inbox may show otherwise. Let’s look at what it means to turn your focus from lists to the people behind those rows of email addresses.

Tipping the Odds of Success in Your Favor

Email list size obsession is one symptom of top-of-funnel fixation, which relies on churning through a bunch of people to extrude as many customers as possible. Here’s how MailChimp CEO Ben Chestnut describes that process:

The idea is that you need a ton of website visitors, then some of them become leads, and then after you do something (the usual recommendation is to bombard the leads with marketing automation) they relent and pay you money, thus becoming a “customer.”

That kind of list-grinding means that “a lead who’s not on the path to becoming a customer is a distraction,” as Ezra Fisher from Wistia observes. Then, having spent all your attention and effort to entice, the very people whom you’ve worked so hard to get in the door are often abandoned, left to their own devices or bombarded with irrelevant messages. What results is a Sisyphean task of constantly filling up a leaky funnel instead of building momentum with audiences, customers, and fans.

What if you flip the funnel over to focus on customers — or go beyond funnel-based thinking, as Wistia does, to focus on audience? These approaches can make your emails much more effective and powerful.

Messages don’t resonate when you have to clamor for attention in a large, indiscriminate crowd that keeps turning over. When it comes to email, the shouting-on-a-soapbox approach doesn’t make sense to connect on a personal level.

Connecting with randoms vs. connecting with an audience

Instead, your probability of success is much higher with specificity and relevance — a personalized approach, carried out over time. When you do the hard work of building and sustaining an audience, your messages go out to people willing to actually listen.

A strategy built on ongoing and relevant communication also transforms every email from a do-or-die chance to make a sale into a building block. As Gary Vaynerchuk observes that, “Email is all about delivering on promises.” Whether you simply have a simple newsletter or you’re a big company with a product — getting an email address is just the beginning.

The Obvious Choice Isn’t Always a Win

Email marketing isn’t just about subscriptions and signups then, but delivering on promises and following through. The marketing and growth teams at Pinterest discovered firsthand how that long-term thinking dims as you get preoccupied with the usual opens and clicks.

For instance, their “Send a Pin” notification (sent when someone wants to share a pin with you) could have been a simple message that made you click through to find out what the pin was. There would be boosts in clicks and traffic to Pinterest, which sounds great and looks like growth. “If we only looked at email clicks rates, it was an obvious choice: make people come to Pinterest and see the message,” marketer Annie Katrina Lee explains.

Pinterest old notification email

Pinterest’s old Share a Pin notification

Annie clarifies how what was obvious wasn’t right: “what we didn’t consider was how much we’d annoy Pinners by adding an additional click to see content they’re interested in.” When they looked at what was actually happening, they saw that these emails increased the recipients’ engagement by 1-2%.

The team ended up deciding to show both message and pin in the email itself. Lee explains the math:

We opted for our long-term gain (building trust with Pinners) vs. short-term gain (more clicks to Pinterest from this specific email), because we could always find ways to drive more clicks from other growth hacks, but it would be difficult to scalably build trust once it’s gone.

Pinterest new notification email

Pinterest’s new Share a Pin notification

Once you stop seeing email as a button to push every time you want to squeeze out some more money, more hits, more clicks, more traffic — your goals become clearer and more meaningful and your emails, more helpful and valuable.

Choose Your Battles, and Scale Trust

Your job is to scale trust, which can seem like an oxymoron of a task. Here’s Annie Katrina Lee again on that conflict:

I hear a lot of horror stories about growth teams hacking new ideas to achieve “hockey stick” growth, but lose brand equity in the process. At Pinterest, we value both our growth rate (how quickly we’re growing) and our brand reputation (how people perceive and feel about us). These goals tend to be at odds with each other, and over time, we’ve learned how to pick and choose our battles wisely.

In marketing, that battle seems constant as you balance your priorities as a business (“our growth rate”) and the customers you serve (“how they perceive and feel about us”). What’s so helpful about the principle of scaling trust is that it steers you to consider whether and how you’re providing value for your customer.

Scaling trust requires being able to deliver positive experiences and build confidence in lots and lots of people. Luckily, this is email’s sweet spot as a channel. There are two things you need to scale trust as an email marketer for web and mobile businesses that I find often overlooked:

  • behavioral data: Modern email marketing draws on real-time behavioral data to segment beyond simple demographics to automate and deliver super-relevant, personalized experiences at scale. Tools like Customer.io give marketers much more access and control to harness such data than was ever possible.
  • thoughtful strategy: Automation and data are nothing without humans understanding how to put it all together. When you’re working towards the long-term with flipped funnels and audience focus, “just sending out another email” can’t be your go-to move. Now spending time chasing email opens and clicks, or seeking that best send time or subject line, don’t always make sense. Anyone can send emails; really understanding why and how to send emails is the key.

It’s not that you shouldn’t care about expanding your connections and audience — but the persistent fixation on list growth feeds the underestimation of what “good email marketing” looks like.

There’s so much that’s challenging, interesting, rewarding, and valuable about email marketing that it’s a shame to reduce that hard work to a few vanity metrics like clicks, traffic, and list size.

Every email is an opportunity to connect with real people, improve their experience and provide value, have a conversation, and make a meaningful difference in how they understand and view your brand. That’s much harder to measure, but more vital in the long run.

How do you use email to scale trust? Share with us in the comments!

What’s in an FNAME?

How did email personalization become synonymous with merging in a name field? “Hello FIRSTNAME” isn’t what makes people run to grab their credit cards.

The power of personalization is no secret. It generates compelling emotions that persuade, support, and connect. Marketers keep resolving to prioritize personalization, especially as we face dwindling attention spans and intensifying readiness to hit unsubscribe.

When you hear “personalization,” you expect a message that’s relevant to you. Instead, the term often describes the simplistic use of static identity attributes, like popping a first name into a subject line.

Popular data sources being used for personalization today

Most marketers rely on demographic and geographic data. But a person is (thankfully) more than the sum of their demographic parts.

Marketing personalization comes to life when you use real-time behavioral data. Yet marketers still have a long way to go, and the proof is in your inbox. Only a third of consumers feel like they’re getting personalized experiences, cites one recent Forrester study. What’s at stake, as VB Insights analyst Andrew Jones lays out, is that: “Without advancing to more mature efforts, most marketers are leaving money on the table.”

Going Beyond Name Personalization

A great gift for a friend isn’t a shirt with their name literally on it. It’s a thoughtful act, based on what you know about the recipient that you’ve learned from your relationship. And that’s a great starting point for your emails too.

Marketing personalization is also powered by purpose. As John Bononi, growth director at Litmus, explains:

Personalization is about so much more than a [first_name]. It’s about understanding what drives a person’s decision making process, where they are in that process, and placing all of it within the context of their specific challenges.

Your email campaigns help people make progress towards their goals (that relate to your business) by meeting their individual needs. Mutual success requires more than a mail merge. It takes effort, analysis, and contextual knowledge.

While short-term goals are focused on persuasion and conversion, more fundamentally, your job as a marketer is to develop good relationships. And whether we’re talking about a user interacting with a digital product or making a new friend — relationships emerge from conversation and interaction. You pay attention to cues and listen to the other person to know what to say next.

Smart marketers know that meaningful personalization relies on contextual and relational understanding, not short-term tricks like using names and pretending messages were sent from the CEO’s iPhone.

The Magic of Modern Email Personalization

Modern email marketing draws on real-time behavioral data to deliver personalized experiences at scale. Modern email personalization is Netflix sending customers recommendations to kick off another binge-watching session — or Buffer sending me an email when my Twitter queue has run out of posts.

You can send much more effective, personalized messages when you’re able to respond to what’s actually happening instead of taking shots in the half-dark or driving yourself crazy with complicated sequences based on a chain of email open and click interactions. That’s powerful when you have to contend with human nature. People don’t behave in straight lines, from point A to B to C. We can’t even do stuff we already want to (hello, New Year’s resolutions…).

Then why are marketers who say they prioritize personalization taking so long to make use of behavioral data? There’s been a lack of access to that data and lack of knowledge that newer technology and tools have made that access way easier. There’s still a huge disconnect between practice and possibility.

Marketers have had to juggle a dizzying array of decentralized, siloed, and inadequate data sources. They deal with user data buried in application code and CRM tools that store limited types of data that’s focused around the sales funnel. They have to handle batched updates, syncing problems, and a terrifying collection of lists. It’s not so surprising then, that personalization takes a backseat.

Many businesses are still stuck in the past, focusing on simplistic personalization and marketing emails that focus on top-of-funnel acquisition and lead generation (where there’s less data to work with, anyway). Jones from VB Insights concludes: “Many marketers simply aren’t aware of the scope of possibilities.

These days, there are powerful customer engagement tools (like Journeys) that surface primary user data for marketers to put into service through integrations and data hubs like Data Pipelines. Now, you can control and automate onboarding messages based on what people have actually done, get super-targeted with offers and content based on combinations of behavior and user attributes, and fine-tune your tactics for nurturing, converting, retaining, and delivering value to your customers.

Tips for Behavioral Marketing Emails

Got behavioral data superpowers? Keep these 3 guiding principles in mind when creating personalized email experiences:

1. Get smart with your segmentation.

Personalization is the opposite of getting up on a soapbox and shouting at whoever is around. It’s about designing a segment of recipients who are most likely to need and welcome your message. And when you work with behavioral data, you’re not working with static lists but real-time, fluid groupings of people that reflect reality. (Head here for some smart segmentation inspiration).

2. Root your messages in purpose.

Focus on helping people decide what to do next and demonstrating your brand’s value. These are just a few behavioral starting points for tailoring your emails and some examples:

  • Abandonment and inactivity: inactivity, app or browse abandonment, funnel drop-offs
Timeshel mobile app activation email
timeshel re-engages you after downloading their mobile app
CloudApp installation nudge behavioral marketing email
CloudApp reminds you to install the app
  • Subscription and membership renewals
  • Upgrades, upsells and rewards
  • Nearing quota limits: time, space, etc.
Woopra quota warning behavioral marketing email
Woopra gives you a heads up if you’re nearing your quota
  • Referrals and Invitations
  • Milestones and accomplishments
  • Reports, digests, wrap-ups to learn about self and activity

3. Personalization is in the details.

Personalization should feel, well, personal, not so very different from getting an email from someone you know. Spend time on your words and tone and voice to escape lazy business-speak, consider going minimal on the design (many email clients turn off images by default).

Bonus tip: Use Fallbacks

If you’re using tags and templating to include first names, have a fallback to avoid those “HI NONAME” situations. Here’s an example of how I handle this for our weekly newsletter:

use fallbacks for user field and tag insertions

Scaling personalization may seem like a contradiction — but that’s exactly the struggle. With great user growth comes increasing challenges to communicate with everyone one-on-one in a way that’s helpful and efficient.

Automating messages based on behavior works when you employ real-time data, have helpful tools to harness that data, and don’t forget the very human and hard work of deciding how to program it all.

What Most Marketers Are Missing in Their Drip Emails

Marketing is like gardening or farming. Whether it’s leads, new users, or paying customers — your job is to nurture newbies to develop into great big fans. Your job is to cultivate.

It’s fitting that green-thumb marketers turn to drip campaigns, which relates back to the agricultural practice of drip irrigation. As Paul McFedries explains in Word Spy:

The phrase drip marketing may sound as though it’s based on the practice of water torture, but it actually comes from the phrase drip irrigation. This is an agriculture/gardening technique in which small amounts of water are fed to plants over long periods of time.

The concept is simple: provide value and care over time to grow happy customers. The problem is that marketers aren’t using email to its full potential to do so.

Drip marketing has been around a long time in various channels, but it gets messy when it comes to email. You’ll hear these terms used interchangeably — drip emails, automated emails, triggered emails, lifecycle emails, behavioral emails, autoresponders — causing confusion and misunderstanding.

We wanted to shed some light on what modern-day, sophisticated drip emails do and how to put them to work for you.

Drip Emails Have Evolved Beyond Timed Autoresponses

A drip email campaign is an automated sequence of emails, triggered by an individual’s action.

The old drip email system is simple and reflexive, kicking off when someone signs up for something like creating an account, subscribing to a website or email course, or making a purchase.

The problem with this dated system of drip emails is that they’re dumb to any context besides a pre-set timetable. Like a configuration of falling dominoes, once these emails start, they’ll keep hitting your inbox in a predetermined order and schedule until they run out, start a subsequent series, or you unsubscribe. That type of relentless conveyer-belt delivery leads one to muse, as McFedries does, that “Perhaps it is a form of torture, after all.”

In contrast, modern drip emails are triggered by people’s behavior. And by behavior, I’m not talking about email opens and clicks, like this:

old-school understanding of behavioral emails

I’m talking about user behavior — the very same behavioral data that you’re probably tracking with analytics tools. What’s so powerful about behavior? Consider one automated, behavioral email — the transactional email.

Transactional emails get much higher engagement rates than other types of email — and it makes total sense why.

Extremely high open and click rates for transactional emails
Experian’s Transactional Email Report

People expect to trigger such messages with certain actions, like making a purchase. You’d even get nervous if you booked an expensive flight but never got a confirmation email. In many ways, transactional emails are the ideal email, hitting all three requirements of revelance: right message, right person, right time.

When drip emails are triggered by people’s behavior on your site or app — rather than time or email opens — you’re starting out closer to that ideal because they’re responding to individual situations. Instead of a relentless, fixed sequences of messages, every person gets an email experience that’s customized to their needs.

Behavioral Drip Emails Make Your Job Easier

It’s an Email 101 rule that every email has a clear purpose. With behavioral drip emails, that purpose becomes much easier to work towards. Instead of being dictated by a time table, messages are tied to actual goals to help people succeed and experience their aha moments.

It’s the striking difference between receiving an email about adding a picture to your social networking app profile because you haven’t uploaded one yet — and receiving that message just because it’s the 3rd drip in the campaign. “Oh, you put up a photo already? Shrug.” isn’t the experience that you’re shooting for.

With purpose in mind, you can hone in on specific conversions instead of sending a random series of “best practice” tips. Here’s a great example of a behavioral drip campaign from CloudApp, a tool that allows you to easily share screenshots and other types of files:

CloudApp drip emails for one goal

For people to get any value from CloudApp, they have to create their first “drop” or file to share. If you’re a new user and haven’t created your first drop, you’ll start receiving this email series, spread out over a month. As soon as you create your first drop, the series stops. Because it’s tied to whether you carry out the action or not, you might only get just 1 or 2 of these emails.

Sending behavioral drip messages is a smarter, more focused way of working in marketing and product. You’re more effective at helping people succeed while ultimately sending them less email, and you can measure real results rather than guessing from clicks and opens.

But only 20% of marketers are using behavioral emails, according to Ecoconsultancy’s 2015 Email Marketing Census. There’s a lot of catching up to do!


Farmers have to pay attention to what they’re growing and in what conditions and context. They take note of the weather, the seasons, the bugs, the quantity of sun and quality of soil, and gauge their progress by how their crops are thriving. And even the humblest houseplant-keeper learns that succulents won’t live if you water them just the same as your spider plant.

Any marketer of a product or service with real users knows that people neither act in the same way or in ways that you expect. It makes little sense, then, to send everyone the same series of messages and just hope for the best.

Just because you’re using automation doesn’t mean that interactions have to be unthinking or superficial. When you use behavioral drip emails, treating email as part of the user experience and responding to how users are interacting with you, you’re paying attention to growth conditions and listening to real people. That’s smart, modern marketing.

Are you using behavioral drip emails in your marketing or not? Share your experience with us in the comments!

Why You Should Use Video in Onboarding Emails

Dropbox was an incredibly novel idea — back in 2009. The concept of the cloud hadn’t quite broken into public consciousness yet and smartphones hadn’t reached its omnipresence. Explaining Dropbox to somone on the street in 2009 would’ve been met with confusion, misunderstanding, or disregard.

So Dropbox took a chance.

Rather than add lengthy explainers or detailed product descriptions to their marketing site, they changed the game for marketing consumer products on the web. Dropbox partnered with video studio Common Craft to make a 2-minute explainer video that cost them $50,000. They wiped the homepage slate clean to show only the explainer video and a download button.

old Dropbox homepage
Upon putting up the video, Dropbox’s conversion rate jumped up by 10%, resulting in 5 million new customers and $24 million in revenue. With over 25 million views today, the video played a huge role in getting Dropbox to 100 million users by 2012, with $0 advertising spend.

Video is one of the most effective ways to engage people — and not just as a way to drive product signups. Combine video with email, and you have a powerful engagement system on your hands, especially for user onboarding to educate, engage, and ultimately win happy customers.

Let’s dig into 3 reasons why video works so well in emails and the tactics you’ll need to incorporate video into your own campaigns.

1. Improve Clickthrough Rates on Onboarding Emails

The period right after signup is one of the best windows for people’s attention. For example, welcome emails have 4x the open rate of most other types of emails.

But of course, solid open rates aren’t everything. If your clickthrough and goal conversion rates remain low, it’s possible that your email content isn’t engaging enough. So how are you going to nudge people to take key actions, like installing an extension or trying out that top feature? Isn’t that a waste of an open?

Video hosting company Wistia wanted to see what video could do to boost engagement in their emails. So they ran a split test “using two identical emails with identical content, except one had a video as the top piece of content and the other had an illustrated graphic.” The clickthrough rate (CTR) for the email with video was 38% versus 12% for the one without video. That’s a win for video by over 3x.

The effective use of video in your onboarding emails can result in more clicks, engagement, and a quicker path to people’s aha moment.

Set Up the Video CTA

What might be confusing when talking about using video in emails is that we don’t recommend that you embed the video itself in the email. The reason is simple: it probably won’t work for your recipients. Apple Mail is just about the only email client that reliably supports embedded video.

What we do recommend is using a screenshot or video thumbnail image with a play button and linking that to the page with your video. The play button becomes your call-to-action (CTA) to grab people’s attention — and will often be more effective than a text link or image alone. It’s what the experts over at Wistia do, themselves. As Director of Marketing Ezra Fishman concludes: “Simply put, a thumbnail image with a link to our site will be more effective for our marketing efforts in almost every instance.”

Here at Customer.io, we’ve seen how including a video CTA in your onboarding email can drive more engagement. Of our post-welcome onboarding emails, our sole email with a video has a 4.1% CTR, compared to an average of 2.2% CTR for the other onboarding emails without video.

customer.io onboarding email with video
Notice how much the video CTA sticks out in the email, compared with the other elements designed to grab your attention, like links and bolded text. It occupies a ton of space, the thumbnail illustrates all those words about how segmenting works in the tool, and the play button tells you to click through.

2. The Shortcut to Understanding

If an image is worth a 1,000 words, a 1-minute video is worth 1.8 million. If you’re trying to explain how to use a particular feature or the moving mission behind a product, videos can serve as the quickest medium for your message to hit home.

When sales intelligence platform Implisit analyzed 250,000 sales emails, they found that emails with fewer than 100 words at the beginning of a series generally outperformed longer emails. Short emails got the highest response rates and drove the most sales.

Shorter emails are better in the beginning.
source: Implisit infographic

Your onboarding emails and traditional sales emails, while different, are both building trust and new relationships. Video contributes to those connections by getting your point across in a more enjoyable and thorough way.

Screencasts, not how-to’s

StatusPage.io — an easy way to communicate your server status — uses video in their onboarding emails to explain key features like Third-Party Components. (Every app today is built on top of dozens of third-party services, like Amazon AWS for web hosting. The Third-Party Components feature connects with those services so that their statuses display directly on your status page.)

In written form, the multi-step process of setting up Third-Party Components takes nearly 500 words, 6 screenshots, and some scrolling — which works well as a help doc. But sending help documentation copy in your email isn’t exactly the best engagement tactic.

StatusPage.io's use of video in onboarding email
Instead, StatusPage.io features a digestible 2-minute screencast in their onboarding email. The kicker here is the design of the user experience, from email to video to app. When you click through from the email, the video autoplays in a modal. When the video is done playing, you’re on the exact page you need to be to start setting up a third-party component. (Here’s another reason why embedding within in email isn’t all it’s cracked up to be.)

Statuspage.io onboarding email to video feature flow

Altogether, that experience is a powerful way to explain a key feature and then nudge people toward taking immediate action on what they’ve just learned.

Showing, not telling

Timeshel is an iPhone app for making prints of your photos every month. Soon after you download the app, they send an email with a video showing you how Timeshel works and how these monthly prints makes life better.

Timeshel video onboarding email
Timeshel’s use of video here, much like Dropbox’s explainer video, compacts information that could take up multiple pages of a marketing site. It weaves story, mission, and product together in one minute. Not only do we get a better sense of the why — it’s not just about pretty pictures but a deeper enjoyment of moments and memories — we get to see people using the app and interacting with those tangible photos.

3. Connect on an Emotional Level

If you’re only measuring the success of your email campaigns on a metric-per-email basis — open rates, clickthroughs, even conversion rates — your thinking is stuck in the short-term. The onboarding period especially is an opportunity to establish an emotional connection and make a lasting impression.

To Wistia co-founder/CEO Chris Savage, video is the best way on the web to do just that. Chris calls this “scaling feelings.” He explains:

Video is a great way to save time, but beyond that, it’s the best way to scale emotions and human connection … and it will sway your audience over to a different way of thinking.

Show Humans in Video Thumbnails

Featuring real people in the video thumbnail is a powerful way to make a human connection. We’re naturally compelled by faces. (There’s even a specific part of the brain that only responds to faces, called the fusiform gyrus!)

This is an effect that Wistia uses to its advantage in its own onboarding emails.

Wistia onboarding email with great video thumbnail
The goal: get people to embed their first video on the web. The thumbnail: friendly-looking faces … amidst an office dance party.

When you click to watch the video, you’re rewarded with a reminder that embeds drive more views to your videos and some fun. Watching Jeff, Max, and co. is way more compelling (and delightful) than reading step-by-step directions or faceless copy.

How to Get Started with Video in Your Onboarding Emails

Before we go, here are 3 more quick tips to take away.

1. Show people there’s a video.
Merely telling people that there’s a video with a link fails to unlock all the power we’ve discussed above. Here’s an example of what I see fairly often:

video CTA using only text
Instead, follow Wistia’s best practices:

  1. Let people know there’s a video (subject line, email text, play button on a thumbnail).
  2. Choose an enticing thumbnail from your video to include in your email (hint: friendly faces attract clicks).
  3. Link that thumbnail to a page on your website.
  4. Keep the number of calls-to-action limited.

2. Use a GIF!
GIFs are a great way to introduce moving elements into your email and capture some of the benefits of video — like demonstrating something in an app or showing humans in motion.

Here’s an example from CloudApp that shows right in the email how super simple it is to use:

CloudApp gif onboarding email
click to see the gif in action

And one from Segment.com that makes a happy human connection with the Segment team, as part of getting you all set up:

Segment.com gif onboarding email
click to see the gif in action

As long as the GIF is set to loop (in the file itself), it will keep looping in any email client that supports it. Some email clients will only show the first frame. For more information, check out Litmus’s helpful guide to using GIFs in email.

3. Put Your Goal First
As awesome as videos (and gifs) are — they should be serving the goal of your email. Don’t include a video just for the sake of adding a video. And if people are clicking through to the video, they’ll likely miss any other calls to action in the email. Putting a video into an account verification email, for instance, ends up being counterproductive.

Video Resources

Now if you’re up for jazzing up your emails with video, here are some resources to get you going:

Screencasting tools:

Editing tools:

Publishing, hosting and embedding tools:

Shooting video:

Video thumbnails:

Have you tried using video in your onboarding emails? What worked and what didn’t? Share your story or thoughts in the comments!

User Onboarding

The Persuasion Playbook for Email Marketers

If you turn your Econ 101 textbook to the first page, you’ll find a definition of homo economicus: the economic man. It’s an old-school way to understand why people make the choices they do. This character is rational, self-interested, and thinks purely in terms of maximizing his utility. Nothing will persuade him except his own economic gain.

And as any marketer knows, that’s a totally unrealistic model.

Sure, we all value utility and economic gain, but we also chase rainbows, windmills, waterfalls, and that last cookie in the jar. Assuming that we’re 100% rational and self-interested is a myopic view of what actually motivates people. If your email marketing campaign is governed by this principle, you’re operating from an expired field guide.

how to email real people
You need to bring more to the table than a good product or a good deal. You need to persuade people to come and stay at your table in the first place.

What follows is our collection of 5 motivational principles to help make you a powerful communicator, no matter what message you’re trying to get across. We’ll dive into why these principles are effective and explore lots of ways you can apply them in your emails.

1. Use Social Validation to Nudge Consumer Behavior

The “Tupperware party” entered the American vernacular in the 1950s. The idea was simple: instead of hiring strangers to sell kitchen goods, the company offered incentives encouraging housewives to become retailers. Women invited their friends and neighbors into their living rooms to drink tea, eat cake, and talk Tupperware.

Sales skyrocketed.

In 1990, researchers at the University of Chicago studied this technique and discovered what the Tupperware Corporation had put into practice so many decades ago: we’re hugely influenced by other people — especially people we know and trust. In fact, liking the hostess of the party influenced women’s decision to buy twice as much as their opinion of Tupperware’s product.

This principle, of course, extends far beyond Tupperware. When we’re uncertain of what to do—whether it’s how to spend our money or how to act — we look to our friends’ and neighbors’ example. Their actions greatly affect our own, whether we assist a choking victim in a restaurant, whether we pay our taxes in full, whether teens shoplift, and whether we recycle.

Making a decision can take a great deal of cognitive effort, so our brains are constantly looking for shortcuts. Social proof, or social validation, is your brain’s tried-and-true shortcut, one that’s increasingly handy now that the internet seems to offer infinite choice.

Show that Friends Are Doing It

Many companies successfully leverage social validation in their emails. This email from Foursquare brings customers back into their app by telling them what their friends have been up to. The subject line is “Save these 4 spots that Nikki, Alisha, and janelle recommended in New York.” We’re all on a first-name basis here.

Foursquare social validation email
And the social validation doesn’t stop there. The email has two sections: one listing restaurants that are trending this month generally, and one for places recommended by people you follow. Dividing the information this way provides a lot of value to customers. It lets them see what’s popular globally and what’s trending within their friend group, giving you two lenses to see what’s cool.

What’s more, every review in the email is accompanied by someone’s name and picture, letting you know that these are real people, not computers. That small bit of social validation introduces a human element into restaurant ratings and reviews, and makes this email something worth clicking on.

Foursquare reviews by real people

Authority Gives Your Argument Gravitas

Friends are powerful influencers because we trust them. Likewise, authority figures (whether it’s a celebrity, a politician, or a powerful organization) are strong influencers, because we’re more likely to trust them.

Amazon might already sound like an authority. But even the behemoth online retailer needed to call in the entertainment industry’s big guns when marketing its latest foray: TV production. When Amazon first started making original series, people raised their eyebrows. Sure, they can sell stuff, but what makes them a credible creative force and television studio?

Amazon had a lot to prove, even to their loyal customers. In this email, Amazon uses the authority of the Emmys to give credit to their TV studio’s show Transparent. The subject line doesn’t explicitly sell readers anything, it’s just an announcement: “‘Transparent’ Wins 5 Emmy® Awards.” The implication is that if the Television Academy likes the show, you should too — and that’s the tack Amazon ends up taking in the body (and preheader) of the email.

Amazon's Emmy win announcement email

2. Apply The Scarcity Heuristic to Boost Your Product’s Value

Aristotle’s point that “What is rare is a greater good than what is plentiful” is something philosophers and psychologists agree upon. When a resource is scarce, we value it more — whether that resource is precious metal or even cookies.

In one study, researchers examined how much people valued a crowd-pleasing dessert: chocolate chip cookies. When participants saw a jar of 10 cookies swapped out for a jar with 2 cookies, they rated them as more desirable to eat, more attractive, and would pay a higher sticker price at the supermarket … despite the fact that they were all from identical Nabisco packages.

Note how the only difference was the consumer’s perception of how many cookies were available. This makes it an easy tool to integrate into your email marketing campaigns, as even hinting that something is scarce can be enough to motivate.

Limited Batch Offers

Let’s say your products really are scarce — you only have a 100 gourmet snack boxes in stock, or there’s a limited amount of tickets you can sell to a concert before violating fire codes. Use your emails to remind customers of this scarcity! The internet makes it seem like there’s an abundance of everything and an infinity of options.

Often, this blinding amount of choice inhibits customers’ resolution to buy. Rather than settle for something they just think they’ll like, they want to make sure they’re getting the best possible deal or the best quality product.

So what’s a marketer to do? Motivate customers to buy now because of the limited supply.

This email from Student Universe does exactly that. It advertises a discount of $100 on flights to New Zealand, but only to the first 150 people to take the deal. It’s not a huge price slash, given that flights are upwards of $1,000 from the United States. But by indicating that the deal is scarce can get people to commit to purchasing sooner.

Maybe they could find an even better deal if they kept looking, but a 10% discount looks pretty good when it’s scarce.

Student Universe's scarcity principle email

Artificial Scarcity

It’s also possible to create artificial scarcity — making something seem scarce when it’s actually not. It’s the reason Starbuck’s pumpkin spice latte is such a hit. The company created buzz around an allegedly seasonal drink that in reality isn’t even seasonal. The pumpkin spice latte could be available year-round, but Starbucks knows that creating artificial scarcity will stir more excitement about the product.

This email from KISSmetrics uses the same technique as Starbucks. They’re offering customers “seats” to a webinar, a scalable product that could theoretically go out to an unlimited number of people without costing them much. What’s more, the webinar is available as an online video on their website after it airs, which means people can access it any time they want. If you take a closer look, the product isn’t scarce at all.

Kissmetrics artificial scarcity email
But this email doesn’t mention any of that. Instead, it stresses that the product is limited. They use the language of a traditional venue — “seats” — making readers feel as though it’s a traditional, unscalable event, and the clear call-to-action tells customers they need to register now. Even though scarcity isn’t really there, the copy motivates people not just to act but also hurry if they want tickets.

3. Trigger An Emotional Response By Using the Framing Effect

We hate losing, and we love winning. But it turns out these powers don’t have equal pull. In fact, study after study reveals that our fear of losing overpowers our excitement at the prospect of gaining something.

Understanding how to frame a decision in terms of losses instead of gains is an effective tool in any marketer’s belt and can easily be incorporated into email campaigns. That’s because, as psychologist Daniel Kahneman explains:

Humans consider gains and losses psychologically rather than logically. A decision maker will select the option with the highest subjective value, whether or not that option provides the highest objective gain.

We process differently when something is framed in terms of loss.

Though the neurobiological mechanism isn’t understood, fMRIs of tests examining the “framing effect” reveal stimulation in the amygdala, the part of the brain associated with fear, emotion, and motivation. Stimulating the amygdala by triggering our fear of loss is an incredibly persuasive technique.

Show Customers What They’re Missing Out On

Swarm is an app that lets people share their locations with friends. It gamifies checking in, so that users gain points for places they go and things they do. Instead of focusing on all the winning users can do within their app, this email focuses on what you’re losing with the subject line: “You’re missing your friends’ check-ins.”

Swarm provokes FOMO with this engagement email
This email instigates FOMO (fear of missing out, which it even defines in the email) by showing what you’re missing by not using their app. Rather than inviting you to join in on the fun, Swarm applies the FOMO lens to play on that common fear that most people have experienced at one time or another: “Is everyone hanging out without me?”

What’s more, the email gives concrete numbers of just how many people are using the app. 706 new check-ins from 20 of your friends! Look at all those smiling faces in the photo — you’re not one of them! Swarm understands that we consider losses psychologically rather than logically — and this tactic makes particular sense for the company, given their app’s value fundamentally relies on the power of social networks.

Warn Customers Of Abandoned Shopping Carts

Abandoned shopping carts emails are another example of this powerful principle of the fear of loss. According to Salescycle, open rates for such emails are “well above 50% and more importantly, conversion rates around 30% across the board (that’s over 3x the rate of traditional marketing emails!).”

Dot & Bo’s cart abandonment campaigns resulted in a whopping 400% increase in revenue. They send one email 2 hours afterward abandonment, and then if you still haven’t completed the purchase, a second email, a day later, sometimes with extra incentives like free shipping. The emails assume you feel some ownership already. Here’s one that says that this white owl lamp is practically mine and it’s just waiting for me. If I don’t take action, I’ll lose it.

Dot & Bo - this lamp is already yours email

4. Cement Your Relationship With the Commitment Principle

When we make commitments to do something (rather than having them imposed upon us), we’re more likely to carry them out. Your copy, therefore, can be more persuasive if you emphasize that there’s a choice in the matter.

Restaurant owners across the nation are plagued by a common problem: no-shows. By holding seats for customers who never turn up, they lose a great deal of revenue. Efforts attempting to staunch the loss, like demanding a credit card to put on file as a precaution, leave customers angry and even offended.

But Gordon Sinclair, proprietor of Gordon’s restaurant in Chicago found a way to change his no-show rate from 30% to 10% without snubbing anyone. He instructed his receptionists to stop suggesting, “Please call us if you change your plans.” Instead they were to ask, “Will you call us if you change your plans?” — and then wait for a response.

By asking for an answer — a firm, specific “yes” or “no” from the customer, the person making the reservation made a commitment. Researchers who looked at Sinclair’s policy shift concluded that by getting a committed response, customers felt a greater stake in the outcome.

How do you apply this psychological principle to your email marketing?

Emphasize the Customer’s Agency

One way is to emphasize a customer’s agency. Remind the customer of the commitment they previously made, no matter how small it was. For example, in upsell or cross-sell emails, a simple “thank you for choosing us” is a simple prompt of the commitment they’d made in the past.

This email from Spotify reminds users why they’re receiving this update: “You are receiving this message because you are following this playlist.” Because users elected to receive this email, they’re more likely to follow through on their commitment to engage. In Spotify’s case, users might be more likely to actually click through on the email and listen to the new song, instead of ignoring it or even reporting the message as spam and impacting your deliverability.

Spotify notification email
It’s why this type of explainer blurb is an email marketing best practice. Reminding users that this email isn’t spam but something they explicitly opted into helps them feel in control and build a sense of trust with you.

5. Get Your Foot in the Door With the Rule of Reciprocity

Reciprocity is a norm that exists across cultures and borders. What’s particularly interesting to marketers is that the rule of reciprocity stipulates that any unexpected gift — no matter how small — still registers with us. It’s why smiling waitresses get up to twice as many tips.

One informative study looked at the payoff of a small gift in the form of a can of Coke. A vendor named Joe asked people to purchase raffle tickets. He gave some of them a soda, just as a favor. When Joe offered people a Coke, they bought twice as many raffle tickets. By creating a small sense of indebtedness, his gift paid dividends of 500%.

Email marketers are perfectly poised to harness the reciprocity principle.

Give A Little, Get A little

We ask a lot from customers. We ask for their attention, for their business, for their “likes” on Facebook. But there’s one thing we ask for that’s notoriously hard to get: the customer survey response. Surveys provide the feedback necessary to give customers a better product or user experience. And they only take a minute. It’s a win-win, right? So why do so many of them go unanswered?

Because the email requesting survey responses don’t motivate people. The video hosting platform Wistia turned the tables by giving a little gift along with their request.

Wistia survey request email
Their gift, fittingly, was a video — a video of the whole team doing the Hustle. It was goofy and fun to produce, sure, but it also got responses. 2,400 people played the video, and they got about 78% engagement. Pretty good stuff. What’s more: over 1,000 people filled out the survey. That’s almost 50% of the people that watched the video. It was enough to get their foot in the door. And it really worked.

Giving customers something to smile about was enough to motivate them to fill out the survey.

A Little Extra: How to Compete With Attention Spans

Why do these little persuasive tricks work? What Wistia, Spotify, KISSmetrics, and other companies understand is that they’re emailing real people — people who didn’t necessarily want to take the time out of their day to fill out their survey, or check out their product, or spend time looking at their webinar. That’s a huge barrier.

Chris Savage, Wistia’s CEO, understands that today’s marketers are facing a huge challenge: shrinking attention spans. He noted, “attention has become a scarce resource. So it’s on us to figure out how we get attention—and when we do get it, how do we keep it.”

Chris’s answer: Get creative. But as a lot of brands have noticed, creative, out-of-the box thinking doesn’t feel scalable when you’re a big company. “It feels a lot harder to take creative risks when you’re bigger.”

But it shouldn’t. The key to battling attention spans is not just to get creative, Chris argues, but to root your creativity in something real, like data or behavioral psychology. Wistia’s survey video worked because it was creative and it understood a fundamental principle about motivation. Your emails need to do the same.

Hundreds of billions of emails are sent every day. While this may seem like a barrier for email marketers, it’s actually an opportunity.

A chunk of all these emails are going to be lazy emails—the ones that see their customers as simply as a rational economic being and not a human. They’ll rely on their awesomesauce deal or cool features to demand customers’ attention, time, and money. Their campaigns won’t be creative, they won’t be persuasive, and they won’t be rooted in motivational principles. And they won’t get results.

Set yourself apart by understanding the humans in front of their inbox.

Have you used any persuasion principles in your emails? Share with us in the comments!

image adapted from MoonSprocket via DeviantArt

How to Create Webinar Invitations that Drive Registrations

The webinar is the marketer’s party. Okay, these learning and lead-generation gatherings probably aren’t as fun without the punch bowl and perfect playlist — but at the planning stages, there’s the same fear. What if nobody shows up?

For webinars (and, presumably, parties) — it all comes down to the invitation.

Email is simply the most effective channel for promoting webinars. 2012 data from BrightTALK show 58-64% of people attending thanks to email and direct invitations. The 2013 ON24 Webinar Benchmark Report states that 80% of registrations come from a combination of email and site promotions.

Your webinar invitations also deserve their own emails. Justine Jordan, VP of Marketing at Litmus, advises that you go beyond tacking on promotional mentions on regularly scheduled marketing messages:

[S]end a stand-alone email! We used to send newsletters with webinar registration links inside, but have found that sending dedicated emails for each webinar results in many more registrations.

Georgiana Laudi, VP of Marketing at Unbounce, also reports: “70% of all our webinar registrations come via our invitation emails.” For our own upcoming welcome email webinar, we can thank our dedicated invitation emails for 76% of registrants so far.

That’s all to say — your invitation emails are vital to a successful webinar! Let’s look at how to make them super effective to bring more people to your web party.

The Essential Ingredients for the Webinar Invitation

Webinar invitation email are all about making it easy for people to say yes and see what the value is for them. Here are all the ingredients you need:

  • WHAT: Webinar title
  • WHEN: Date and time of the webinar
  • WHO: Introduce the people presenting, especially if there’s a guest
  • HOW: Calls to action to register (buttons, links, etc.)
  • WHY: What’s in it for the reader? What problem will you help them solve?
  • WHAT: What will people learn? What should they expect from the presentation?
  • CARE: The invitation is an early exercise in being a great and empathetic host. Make it easy to sign up. Address blockers by informing folks whether the recording will be available if you can’t attend the live event. Set expectations by being clear about any Q&As.

Here’s an example from Litmus of all those elements at work:

Litmus webinar invitation example

7 Tips to Optimize Your Webinar Invitations

Now let’s explore some tips to make those ingredients shine.

1. Have Time Zone Empathy

The challenge of coordinating any type of meeting online, whether it’s an interview, chat, or your amazing webinar, is getting timezones correct. You’ve probably put thought into scheduling your webinar at a time that makes sense for your audience — but don’t make your readers have to do timezone math (which, for some reason, is always more complicated than regular math).

Most people attempt to account for this by including 2-3 timezones in their invite. Some even go so far as to provide a link to a timezone converter. But the best treatment of timezones in webinars invitations that I’ve seen come from Litmus and Skillcrush.

Skillcrush webinar invitation timezone empathy

Skillcrush provides a handy “Convert to your timezone!” link, which sends you straight to a page with the correct conversion. You can use timeanddate.com’s handy Event Time Announcer to set up this type of link for your own invitations.

Litmus webinar invitation timezone empathy

Similarly, Litmus provides a helpful “View in your timezone” link — which leads you to a Permatime page that shows you the date and time in your local zone (according to your computer settings). With Permatime, you can also add a label and link to your event:

Update: Permatime is no longer around, but you can check out Every Timezone

Permatime labeled event example

2. State the Problem

Spelling out the problem or challenge is an effective tactic for two reasons. It forces you to take on the perspective of your audience — and provides a great lead-in to your description of what people can take away from the presentation if they sign up. That “you have this problem” plus the “we help you solve it” one-two punch ultimately helps to craft a compelling pitch.

Email on Acid webinar invitation

Email on Acid promises to solve a common problem that haunts most email marketers: the Great Fear of Hitting Send. This approach results in much more compelling copy, like the call-to-action to “eliminate that awful pit in your stomach,” than something blah like “learn the best practices of email deliverability”

Here’s a great example from Unbounce that also pinpoints a problem that causes doubts and insecurity:

Unbounce webinar invitation describing challenge to be solved

The pain of getting copy to pop is real. Unbounce taps into that and promises to deliver “a foolproof system for writing targeted, persuasive copy for all your landing pages—without losing your mind.” Who wouldn’t want that!

That leads perfectly into the 4 concrete lessons that you’ll take away from attending the webinar.

Unbounce webinar invitation describing solution to be learned

3. Make a personal connection.

The fact that you’re writing as a business or professional is never a reason to sound like you’re filling out a corporate fill-in-the-blanks form. Even if there’s a bit of a formula to webinar invitations, what will make your message compelling and convincing is your ability to connect as people.

# Use images of people

bit.ly webinar invitation email

Simply by providing photos of the people involved in a webinar, Bit.ly makes their invitation more appealing and warm. The way they’ve formatted their email is also helpful — everything you need to know at a glance, right at the start. Invitation messages are no occasion to bury the lede.

Wistia webinar invitation email

Wistia’s screenshot of a video with Kristen not only shows a human face behind the upcoming webinar but it’s also a simple, inviting way for people to find out more about the event. You could create one or two teaser videos to capture interest and strengthen people’s motivation to actually attend the webinar live.

# Talk like a real, live person

Making a personal connection can be accomplished simply with tone and style. Joanna Wiebe is one of the best copywriters out there — and of course her webinar invitation doesn’t disappoint.

Copyhackers webinar invitation email

In a matter of 10 lines or so, she gets across everything you need to know, from identifying the existing challenge, the promise of a solution, and details. This checks off all the webinar invitation elements, and it’s done in a succinct, totally relatable way, signing off with a casual, personable “See you there, jo”

# Send a simply-formatted, unbranded message

Copyhackers webinar invitation email

Hana Abaza, VP of Marketing at Uberflip, takes the personal approach with this text-focused, simply-formatted email. No logos, no images — just a message written as if she wrote it to you in her Gmail account. The “What are you doing this week?” line is an interesting change-up from the usual announcement of the webinar in the subject.

4. Tap into FOMO (Fear of Missing Out)

While persuasion principles are handy in marketing your webinar overall, the scarcity principle is especially fitting to add motivation oomph to emails. Scarcity is persuasive because people tend to want what they can’t have. You’ll find examples of this when you see language expressing a scarcity of time or space — “now”, “limited seats”, “special invitation”, “time’s running out”, etc.

Here’s an invite from Iris Shoor at Startup Moon that applies the scarcity principle 4 times in her copy. Can you identify them all?

Startup Moon webinar invitation email

  1. “special invite for you”
  2. “exclusive webinar”
  3. “Spots are limited.”
  4. “We want to bring you more than what you can find on Google.” Promising exclusive knowledge in your webinar is a smart touch.

5. Target your invitations

Target your webinar invitations at specific segments of your userbase and email lists. It’s the golden rule of email at work — relevance, first — and your metrics will improve across the board. Not only will have a better chance of successful conversions (webinar registrations), you’ll reduce needless unsubscribes and damaging spam reports.

Check out this webinar invitation email from Mention:

Mention webinar invitation email

While it might not look very different from the other emails in this post, this invitation was specifically sent to Mention users who work in marketing. By targeting an audience who’s more likely to be interested in this webinar’s subject — conversion rate optimization and growth — Mention is increasing their chances of success to drive registrations without annoying the rest of their userbase.

Here are some additional ideas for segments you can target:

  • engaged newsletter readers
  • someone who downloaded an ebook or resource recently
  • recent signups to your product
  • a specific segment of your userbase
  • attributes like job role or signup source

We took a page from 15Five’s winback email strategy to send out webinar invites to lapsed and inactive Customer.io account-holders. That segmentation resulted in 76% of registrations so far.

6. Send a sequence of emails

Webinar email campaigns span more than the invitation itself. There are teasers, confirmation message with logistics and details, and follow-ups. But that doesn’t mean you should only send one dedicated invitation email.

Send at least two invitation emails, with the second one coming close to the date of the webinar. That way you can put the time scarcity persuasion principle to work — with phrases like “last chance”, “time’s running out”, “only X days/hours” to motivate in your copy and subject line. Multiple invitation emails are also a great opportunity to try different angles and tactics to entice readers.

7. Don’t forget the details.

Go straightforward with the subject line.

And for the from name, we recommend going with the familiar and following whatever pattern your recipients are used to. Just make sure not to overlook the “from name” detail — you might end up with something by mistake like “webinars”.

from-name overlooked

Of course, at the end of the day, testing is the best way to see what works. (Joanna has some great insight and advice on the from-name and subject line.)

Lastly, I thought I’d share some links to resources on holding webinars I found particularly helpful.

What are some winning touches or missteps you’ve seen in webinar invitations? We’d love to hear, so share in the comments!

5 Tactics to Fuel Retention and Slash Churn

Churn is a SaaS company killer. With 5% churn monthly, you’re losing half of your customers every year. That means you need to bring in half the number of the customers you have every year just to stay flat.

At iDoneThis, the easiest way to run a remote daily standup, our churn could get as high as 10% on a monthly basis! That made growth extremely challenging, and we knew we had to cut it down significantly.

After months of hard work, we were able to reduce our churn to 3%, about a third of what it was at its peak. That’s still too high, but putting a dent in that dreaded rate made all aspects of running the company feel easier.

Here’s how we did it.

No Silver Bullet

There are no hacks for retention. This is the hard work of building product. The activities we did to tackle churn fall into 3 categories:

  1. Fundamental product work to increase core value
  2. Communicating with customers to bring them back to the app to reignite interest and re-experience the core value
  3. Making it totally frictionless to capture a portion of the value created

And they all depend on each other. For example,

  • Without product iteration, the product story won’t evolve and people won’t see a reason to come back to an app they’ve abandoned.
  • Active communication with customers feeds back into product design and roadmap prioritization
  • When you’re in close communication with your customer, it’s easier to ask them to pay or upgrade.

That said, it’s totally normal to feel daunted by the prospect of reducing churn. You’re getting at the heart of making your product and company actually work, and that can seem like a long, rocky road.

But don’t despair — a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. Start with just one small thing, work on it, improve it, and you’ll be on your way to fixing your churn problem.

5 Ways to Cut Churn

1. Email your customers

Email is still the single most effective way to reach customers.

The issue for founders is that we get a lot of email … and we hate it. That makes us not want to send email to our own customers. Thinking this way is understandable, but it’s a huge mistake. If you aren’t emailing your customers, you’re doing yourself and your company a major disservice. We use Customer.io to reach out to current and former customers to bring them back to our app, because it’s easy to send personalized, tailored email that trigger based on behavior inside of the app.

These are the 3 types of emails that we send. First, we send onboarding emails to get the customer started. Losing 75% of your potential customers in the trial period is a type of churn. During this time, you want the prospect to have that aha moment where they experience your product’s core value.

iDoneThis's triggered email campaign overview in Customer.io

Second, we send lifecycle emails to reach out to the customer periodically to cultivate our relationship. It’s foolish to assume that just because somebody has become a customer, that they’re a customer for life. Stay in touch with them.

Onboarding emails mostly apply to the first 30 days or so of the customer relationship. After that, you still need to follow up, even at day 90 or 180 or 270 to see how they’re doing and to make both happy and unhappy people happier. If a customer cancels, you should email them to figure out why.

All of this will give you advanced notice on potential churn and allow you to fix problems before they run too deep.

Finally, we send update emails. Every time you improve your product or make an update to your company that will improve the customer experience, let the customer know. This will reduce churn in two ways. Customers are less likely to cancel if they perceive constant improvement to the product and experience. And customers who cancel for a particular reason, like missing feature, can be reactivated when that reason is addressed.

Send highly targeted emails so that your updates will be appreciated. We typically create multiple segments to our userbase containing 175,000+ emails to ensure that everyone receives a personalized message that applies to their specific circumstances.

2. Prioritize Your Support

Early stage startups have to do a ton with really small teams. Often support might be done by 1 dedicated support person with the rest of the team doing rotations or jumping in on thorny problems until the company grows larger. Prioritization is vital to get the team on the same page and close high-value issues quickly.

Support issues are usually time-sensitive. If you address them swiftly, you’ll have a customer. If not, you’ll lose them. It’s that simple.

We use Help Scout for our help desk, and we customized it with prioritization in mind. First, we created 3 high-priority inboxes: Enterprise support, Billing, and Help.

Billing-related issues are usually urgent, so they need to be addressed quickly. Enterprise customers pay the most money, so we want them to get squared away. For instance, if a customer’s credit card declines, we’ll send email warnings. If it declines 3 times, we’ll cancel the account automatically. Requests to reactivate come into our Billing inbox. Address them quickly, and we’ve just saved a customer from churning. Take too long, and the disruption in service can be enough to make them lose interest.

We use Help Scout workflows to surface urgent emails inside of each inbox.

Help Scout workflow

The workflow feature allows you to define a conditional if-then action, and we use these to help us hone in on our paying customers.

  • We have 150,000+ free users and needed to separate their help requests from those of paying customers. We defined a workflow that moved their requests to a separate inbox.
  • We resurface the oldest tickets to the top of the queue to make sure that we get them taken care of.
  • We put urgent emails at the top so that we get to them first in each inbox.

We also set up HookFeed‘s integration in Help Scout to bring in the context of Stripe customer data during the support process.

hookfeed helpscout demo image

This informs your support team about which customers are paying, how much, and for how long. If a thorny engineering issue comes up, this information empowers them to push teammates to fix the problem. If a customer has been with the company for a long time, the support team can throw in a personalized note of thanks.

This creates support targeted towards those customers who can move the needle the most on churn while improving your brand and customer experience for the long term.

3. Go upmarket

One of the highest impact things we did to reduce churn was going upmarket. In the past, our biggest account for iDoneThis was maybe $200/mo. We built an enterprise version of our product, and we started getting accounts that were $2,000+/mo.

Going upmarket can increase your revenue by as much as 20x, and a huge reason is that bigger customers churn less. There are a few reasons for that:

  • Startups and small companies go out of business all the time, and that means churn. It’s more rare for big companies to go out of business.
  • Big companies take longer to onboard, but once they have, they don’t want to go through that process again with little reason. They’ll stick with your product unless a 10x solution comes around.
  • Big companies don’t care as much about cost — what they care about is value.

We grew our enterprise plan into a healthy 20% chunk of our business that churned far less, and this significantly reduced the churn overall.

The big question is: how do you get bigger customers? The answer lies in your existing customers. Look through your customer list — customers who are using a work email address, like steve@apple.com are your most promising prospects.

  • Do you have multiple accounts from the same company? Upsell them into a consolidated enterprise account.
  • Do you have a single user account who is using your product for work? Build a team version and upsell them into multi-seat accounts.
  • Do you have company executives who have signed up? Get them interested in a company-wide deployment.

You don’t need to build a whole sales team to make this happen. Run through your current list of customers and put the most promising contacts into a tool like Close.io, a CRM we use to manage the sales process. Then, systematically get in touch, one by one, by email and phone. You can do all of that inside of Close.io, which tracks everything for you and lets you know when it’s time to follow up.

I had no experience doing sales prior to our initiative to go upmarket. We were able to pull it off, and it had a huge impact on churn. The #1 thing I learned is that you close deals when you’re persistent. In the words of Close.io founder and CEO Steli Efti, “Life is all about the follow up.”

4. Track your metrics

It’s important to break out your churn into cohorts. With 1 aggregate churn number, it’s hard to see whether any of your changes are making what kind of impact. Each cohort will be a week or a month in which the customer signed up. What you’re looking for is whether the churn in your most recent cohorts appears better than your churn in your older cohorts.

The tool we choose to use for this is ProfitWell because it works via Stripe. You connect your Stripe account in order to produce actionable data like this cohort table:

Profitwell cohort table example

The main problem that you’re going to encounter is fluctuation in the churn from cohort to cohort. It can even fluctuate wildly, as in the example above. That makes it hard to understand your progress by looking at the cohorts alone. You’ll need to dig one level deeper into the data to understand it. Did your churn plunge in one cohort because a large customer cancelled, throwing off the data? Maybe large-customer cancellation is a persistent problem, and one you can fix to make a noticeable dent on your churn.

Look at the actual customer data behind your cohort analysis to get a more complete picture of whether you’re improving, regressing, or staying the same.

5. Yearly billing

Lastly — one quick win you can nail is to offer a yearly subscription plan in addition to your monthly plan.

When the customer’s enthusiasm for your product is at its height, offer them a discount in exchange for committing to a year up front. You’re likely to see a solid 10%-25% of your customers willing to accept your offer.

Customers can go through cycles in how they feel toward your product. If your customers cancel during a trough of engagement and sign up again during a spike of enthusiasm, your churn numbers will be high. Getting the customer on a yearly plan is a way to stabilize commitment and experience value throughout a longer-term customer lifecycle.

However, if you do add a yearly subscription plan, here are a few things you need to watch out for:

  • You might have only postponed churn. When the next year comes around, you could see a rash of yearly subscription cancellations. To mitigate the risk of that happening, phase yearly billing into the mix gradually, over a few months, so that you can see what happens and make adjustments.
  • Don’t ignore your yearly customers or take them for granted. An annual bill amount is pretty large — so your customers will put more thought into whether they want to renew than they might for a smaller monthly subscription. Make sure that you’re just as active about communicating with your yearly customers as you are with your monthly customers.
  • Make yearly auto-renewal as frictionless as monthly subscriptions. Credit cards go stale in between billings far more frequently for yearly cycles than it does for monthly, because of the increased span of time. That magnifies the importance of pre-dunning emails, the emails that you send before a credit card expires in anticipation of expiration.

How Did You Reduce Churn?

Reducing churn is one of the hardest things to do. That’s why I love hearing from other people on how they tackled a high churn problem and cut it down to size.

How did you reduce your product’s churn, and what tips and tricks can the rest of us take away from your experience? Let us know in the comments below!

walter chen headshotWalter is the co-founder and CEO of iDoneThis, the easiest way to run a daily standup with your team. Follow him on Twitter at @smalter.